A short story in a long paragraph
Seeing Athens through this ghostly lens opened up new avenues of vision for familiar places. As someone pointed out, you really are the Alfonso Cuarón of the prose poem.
Au revoir!
Nicely put and much appreciated, Eros. Thank you!
Wow, this was impressive. So fluid yet so evocative. I felt like I was there.
Humble thanks, Mr. Marks!
As someone who wrote some one-sentence stories, I really enjoyed this one
Thank you, fellow traveller, thank you indeed.
I'm glad I followed the recommendation. This took me back to scenes from post-war Italian literature.
Thank you, JD!
Wow amazing! This felt like I was watching a one-take film.
Thank you, D, for braving through to the closing credits.
Line breaks in place of commas, what a poem!
Hmm, that's an idea... Would probably make it easier on the reader, too.
Seeing Athens through this ghostly lens opened up new avenues of vision for familiar places. As someone pointed out, you really are the Alfonso Cuarón of the prose poem.
Au revoir!
Nicely put and much appreciated, Eros. Thank you!
Wow, this was impressive. So fluid yet so evocative. I felt like I was there.
Humble thanks, Mr. Marks!
As someone who wrote some one-sentence stories, I really enjoyed this one
Thank you, fellow traveller, thank you indeed.
I'm glad I followed the recommendation. This took me back to scenes from post-war Italian literature.
Thank you, JD!
Wow amazing! This felt like I was watching a one-take film.
Thank you, D, for braving through to the closing credits.
Line breaks in place of commas, what a poem!
Hmm, that's an idea... Would probably make it easier on the reader, too.